Thursday, 29 July 2021

Everyone had a story about him

This week I did a very detailed interesting quick write  with the story starter: Everyone had story about him. In the story he had a deep dark secret that he was a thief and he couldn't stop robbing places because his family will mentally and physically abuse him. So they end up running away together.
    

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  1. Anonymous29 July 2021 at 12:32

    Aloha Ella,
    I love the way you added extra detail to your blog. It reminds me of when I ran away before. Maybe next time make the picture a little bit bigger so it is easier to read. But overall I loved your blog.
    Kamo Te wehi Ella.

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  2. Anonymous30 July 2021 at 10:56

    Hi Ella, I really loved your blog and how much detail you put into it. This reminds me of when I used a story starter to make a story about a master criminal. How long did it take you to write this?- Esther

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