6 Sentences Only!!!???

In L3 writing  our teacher challenged us to write a whole story, but there was a catch the story had to be 6 sentences long. My story was about an isolated horse without any friends. The story goes like this:

Once upon a time there lived an isolated horse who longed to have friends.

She lived in a massive field in the middle of nowhere!

This horse used to be the ultimate show jumping horse she even competed at the olympics.

Everyday she would dream her owner would come and visit her or even get her a new friend, it never happened though.

Friendless is the best way to describe the way that she felt.

One day as a wild herd came past she decided to leap the fence and join them and she lived happily ever after. 

I hope you like it!

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My holidays

 In the holidays I did nothing special but I did horse ride a lot and when I say a lot I mean a lot, I horse rode nearly every day. I rode a horse called Peanut she is the horse that I lease. I did it with Maria and Orla they are both older than me. We rode alone at the Lysnar Valley Equestrian. 

I was down there from 9 am to 5 pm thats 8 hours.

 

I would not ride all day that would be cruel, we clean up the halters and gear then we  cleaned the brushes and the tubs.

 We played with the baby goats there were 3 goats Salt, Pepper and Mini, but pepper died because she was not eating and drinking, we think we know why: there was a dead bird in the water and she might of became sick from a disease. But mini jumps on your back when you sit down.

Then we went inside and we ate a apple orla was making funny faces and I started laughing then I started to choke it was funny because maria patted my back really hard and then she started yelling: Ellas gone die, Ellas gone die, Ellas gone die. then we went and rode we rode up winifred and then went in the arena we rode them back to their paddock bareback but with a cover and a bridle then it started to rain. We were getting soaked and all dirty peanut had poop on her cover and I got it on my leg and thigh (it was disgusting). Maria got all wet on her butt.

At the end of the day I am happy that I went nowhere special because I enjoy horse riding as much as going away and shopping.

Frosty the pony

Frosty the pony

"Here we are, We are here. this is fancy"said 

Cindy.  That pony

 is perkey over there.  "Hi, im Karen bevits 

kid"said Isabella. 

"Where is your mum darling?"said my mum.  

Isabella replied: she is in the shower. Ten 

seconds later Karen bevit was outside tacking 

frosty up. She (the pony) was crabby and 

tried to bite mum.  Then a kid called Oliver 

hopped on Frosty.  She was lame as in saww.  

Karen demanded Oliver to trot. So he gave her 

a kick and said trot on, she didn't listen 

and he gave her a wack. She trotted. Then 

Karen said that is it,  do you want to buy 

her?  "No" we said.

THE END