In L3 writing our teacher challenged us to write a whole story, but there was a catch the story had to be 6 sentences long. My story was about an isolated horse without any friends. The story goes like this:
Once upon a time there lived an isolated horse who longed to have friends.
She lived in a massive field in the middle of nowhere!
This horse used to be the ultimate show jumping horse she even competed at the olympics.
Everyday she would dream her owner would come and visit her or even get her a new friend, it never happened though.
Friendless is the best way to describe the way that she felt.
One day as a wild herd came past she decided to leap the fence and join them and she lived happily ever after.
I hope you like it!
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Hi, Ella I loved your blog I liked how you talked about the sentences and and didn't just get strait into the story. I liked the picture and arrows I loved writing the six sentence stories mine was about a girl that wanted to horse ride but couldn't. From Alice
ReplyDeleteHi Ella, I like how you added some interesting words, that is a big challenge but you got through it like it was nothing, like actually nothing. It's pretty cool that it got a chance to compete in the olympics, she had to of been a really good horse jumper to compete in the olympics. I do like it, the background looks really nice too.
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