Thursday, 4 July 2019

Interesting haiku poem

 Hi I'm Ella, This term we made haiku poems and they were about matariki.  I also learnt that other countries have different cultures.  My haiku poem was about the Navajo peoples culture.  My Poem went like this: 
The Flint Flint boy cluster,  
Every time he stamps his foot,  
the stars move upwards. 

I Like it, do you? Tell me in the comments.


2 comments:

  1. Ella I like how you wrote the poem so that the words had the right amount of syllables. You have used good quality presentation of your poster. I wonder if the Navajo people also celebrate at the time of year the cluster rises?

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  2. Hi Ella I like your picture of the black sky god. It looks amazing.
    I also like your Haiku.

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